The attack. A short story by Charles Roberts
Willie Barlow, sixteen
years old, stood in the water filed and muddy trench, his teeth chattering and
his body shaking with nerves. He was
cold, tired, scared, and about to go over the top, for the first time, to meet
whatever hand fate dealt him. He’d
joined the Army when the rest of his mates from the mill joined, he didn’t want
to be left out so he lied about his age.
His instructors always looked at him sideways as much to say as we know
that you’re too young, but you must have guts lad.
His mum
had been dead against him joining up as his dad had been killed in the Boar
war, miles away in South Africa; all she had to remember him were his medals
and a letter from the Queen. Fix
bayonets was called from somewhere to Willie’s right, he had trouble pulling it
from the webbing scabbard which hung from the belt on his left hip and then
almost dropped it into the mud he was shaking so much.
He felt
a calming hand on his shoulder, “no rush lad,” the sergeant said as he walked
calmly by, “take your time, we have plenty of that. Now then lad take this bag of mills bombs
with you, if you get the chance throw them into the enemies trenches; you do
know how to use a mills bomb don’t you?”
“Yes sergeant," he replied, "pull the pin and throw it with all your might towards the enemy trench, then
drop to the ground.”
“That’s the way Willie my
lad.” Willie pulled the strap over his
head and put his left arm through it so that he could pull the bombs out with
his right hand, then he fitted his bayonet to his rifle, but found that he’d
stopped shaking. Somehow the little chat
with the sergeant had given him reassurance and courage; now he was ready to go
over the top.
Suddenly the whistles
blew up and down the trench and all the men dashed up the short ladders and
over the parapet onto the field of battle, Willie was in the first line so he
dashed up with the rest and ran as fast as his legs could carry him towards the
enemy. A little voice in his head kept
telling him that today was going to be his day.
He could see an enemy
machine gun nest slightly to his left and another about a hundred yards to his
right as he clambered over the barbed wire; bodies still hanging from it left
over from the previous charge, something told him to go towards the nest on the
left. Shells were exploding all around
and machine gun and rifle bullets whistled as they passed him, “you never hear
the one that gets you,” he’d been told.
He threw himself into a
water filled shell hole as the bullets started to hit the ground round him. The
mud being kicked up as they hit the top edge of the shell hole, he adjusted his
tin hat and peeked over the top of the ejected muddy soil and took a guess that
he was about seventy yards from the machine gun nest he had been running
towards. Can I throw that far? He asked
himself as more bullets kicked up the mud of the shell hole.
He waited for a slight
lull then crawled to the next water filled shell hole, he’d only moved about
ten yards forward, but estimated that he was close enough to use a mills
bomb. He was just about to take one out
of the satchel when a shell exploded just over the edge of his sheltering
place, covering him mud and shattering both his ear drums making him quite deaf. He pulled himself together and took out a
mills bomb, standing he threw it with all his might at the machine gun nest; as
he was dropping back into his shelter he saw the grenade hit the top of the
parapet round the nest and roll in.
After he’d counted to
thirty he peered over the top of his shell hole and saw that they had stopped
firing. He jumped up and ran towards the
machine gun nest and jumped over the sandbag parapet to see the three gunners
lying dead. He turn the gun towards the
other machine gun nest about a hundred yards down the trenches and opened fire.
He could see his bullets
hitting the sandbags and two of the men disappear, as the gun fell silent, at
this time the rest, all those of his mates who were still alive, arrived and
attacked the trenches, winning one small battle in a bloody war. Willie was given a medal and sent home, his
world filled with the sound of silence until his dying day.
A powerful piece. The tragedy of so many dead, a 16 year old fighting for his life in the wet and mud and cold, and then he gets a medal but loses his hearing. Very well written.
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