The Hostage. A short story by Charles Roberts
Janie
was bundled roughly into the back of the car and thrown to the floor, the next
thing she knew was that the car was speeding off down the street away from the
bank. She heard thuds as bullets hit the
trunk and back of the car, the rear window shattered; and whoever was in the
back seat, she couldn’t see because of the blindfold, opened fire with a
Thompson machine gun, the hot empty shell cases falling onto her back and arms.
“Thought you said that
this car was bullet proof.”
“That’s what Vinny told
me, just keep firing and keep those bastards away from us.”
She didn’t know just what
the robbers intended to do with her and was frightened to move in case they
decided to simply shoot her and throw her out onto the street.
“Strike one cop car,” the
man on the back seat shouted elatedly.
The robbers were talking loudly about how well the robbery had gone and
they were free and clear, and it was only a matter of time before they reached
the hideout and could split the money.
One question which was on each of their minds was how much they had
gotten away with.
Janie
slid to one side of the car as it went round a corner fast, she banged her head
against the door and screamed.
“Shut your fucking mouth
bitch or I’ll shut it for you, permanently.”
“She’s our ticket out of
here.”
She slid the other way as
the car went round another corner, now she could see between the two front
seats. Suddenly she started to see stars
appearing on the windscreen as bullets hit, but they didn’t penetrate;
“Fucking cop road
block. Drive through it, put your foot
down. See I told you it was bullet
proof, didn’t I?” However it wasn’t long
before it was almost impossible to see anything through it.
She
felt the car shudder and heard a loud bang as the car careered through the
road-block knocking the two police cars aside.
More bullets were hitting the car as the robbers sped on. Janie felt someone fall on top of her and
could feel something wet soaking through the back of her blouse. All of a sudden Janie heard a loud crash and
the car stopped its forward motion she was thrown against the back of the
driver’s seat, knocking her out. The
next thing she knew was someone asking her if she was all right, if she’d been
hit anywhere as her back was covered in blood.
Someone
helped her from the crashed car and over to a waiting ambulance, there they put
something on a gash on her forehead and wrapped a blanket round her
shoulders. It was now that she saw that
the car she had been in was up against a large tree, bullet holes covering the
sides and back, the driver hanging out of the bullet ridden door, blood
everywhere.
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