The enveloping darkness. A short story by Charles Roberts
The
enveloping darkness.
A
short story by Charles Roberts
A flame flickered and
died plunging the room into darkness.
“Damn!” she spat in
anger, rising from her chair where she had been quietly thinking and
rocking. “Now where are those candles?”
she asked no one as the room was empty.
“In the Welsh Dresser,” a
voice said, “the middle drawer, left hand side at the back.”
“Who’s there?” she asked,
“who are you?”
“A friend,” the voice
said calmly, “just a friend.
“Friend! I don’t have friends. What are you doing in my house anyway? Telling me where I keep my candles. What’s your name? You call yourself my friend, when I know I
don’t have any, so what do they call you?”
“I answer to a lot of
names.”
“Don’t talk to me in
riddles. Just tell me your name.”
“Aren’t you going to get
that candle first?”
“I’ll do what I want to
do when I want to do it.”
“That sounds
reasonable. One thing at a time, always
a good idea.”
“Are you going to tell me
your name or not?”
“Let me see. Should the cat tell the mouse when he is
going to pounce? Should the Eagle tell
the rabbit when he is going to strike?
Should the general tell his enemy when he is going to attack?”
“Riddles! Riddles!
Riddles. Why do you talk in
riddles? Why not give me a straight
answer?”
“When are you going to
get that candle out of the middle drawer of the dresser, then we might be able
to see something in this blackened room.”
“Don’t go telling me what
to do in my own house. If you don’t like
the dark then go! No one invited you
here. You call yourself my friend, but
you show up uninvited and unexpected then go about telling me what I should do
in my own house. Be gone with you and
don’t come back.”
“As you wish.”
A silence fell on the
room, a silence so thick that you could have cut it with a knife. She stood quite still halfway between her
rocking chair and the dresser, she knew that there was something which usually
stood between the two, but couldn’t remember what it was or how big it
was. She did know, however, that if she
walked into it she would skin her shins, what should she do?
“Are
you there?” she called, “can you hear me?” she called again feeling worried and
slightly scared that she was alone in that huge house without light or
help. “Come back. I need you.”
The silence thickened, grew more intense. “Please come back,” she was starting to panic
now that she could almost feel the silence.
“I need your help,” she called again, her mouth drying with the
panic. “Please!” her tongue felt larger
in her mouth, “I’m sorry for all I said,” she was rooted to the spot not daring
to move. “I’m begging you to return and
help me. Please!” Her knees were beginning to weaken with the
tiredness, the darkness like an oversized cloak wrapping itself round her and
slowly squeezing her, squeezing the life out of her. The silence, the utter and complete silence
sucking the very breath out of her.
“Please
help me,” she managed to say as her knees gave way under her and she fell to
the carpeted floor. The tears started to
flow, “I didn’t mean to be so rude to you,” she managed to say, “I know now
that you were only trying to help,” her voice weak and muffled by the thick
cloak of darkness and the choking silence.
She fell forward onto her hands and knees, struggling to breathe now
that the silence was ever thicker.
“Please,” she pleaded, giving way to the weight of the cloak of darkness
and finally lying down on the Persian carpet, “don’t let my life end this
way. Please come back and help me find
the candles. Please help me,” her voice
no more than a whisper which was swallowed by the all-enveloping silence. She closed her eyes because she couldn’t even
see the pattern on the carpet due to the darkness. “Help!” she managed to call through a stone
dry mouth, with a tongue now twice its size, it’s over, she thought,
they’ll find me in the morning, ah, but tomorrow is Sunday so they won’t find
me until Monday. Ah well I suppose that I’ve had a good innings, as they say, I
just wish that it didn’t have to end this way.
The
next thing she knew, or realised, was that there was a cacophony of sounds,
people talking the sounds of trolley wheels on tiles. Light was struggling to enter her closed
eyes, everywhere there was sound and light, and she was being moved, she knew
this because lights kept flashing above her.
Suddenly they stopped, the movement, the lights became stationary.
“Are
you all right mum?” she heard from her left, she turned her head and opened her
eyes expecting to see the Persian carpet, but instead saw her daughter
silhouetted against hospital curtains.
“Are you all right mum?” she asked again, putting her hand onto her
mothers.
“Yes
darling,” she said managing a smile.
“What
were you doing in the dark?”
“We had
a power cut and I couldn’t find the candles.”
“They’re
in the welsh dresser mum.”
A very well written piece. The initially cantankerous response, then fear, then humility and finally acceptance. Its all in here.
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